Will each one of these relationships be very clear towards visitor?

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Alethea:
No one to talk, or discuss the things to get someone's opinion.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
I don't have friends at all, i am all alone.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
I am looking for opinion about my situation i am going through.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
Male here, i feel so strange & awkward about myself about the situation i am into these days, trying very hard to calm my mind and trying harder to make some friends to talk or to discuss life.
(14 April 2017)

Winter:
I'm always shaking, why?
(14 April 2017)

Winter:
I just don't understand why, any help in what the cause of this is, is Greatly Appreciated.
(14 April 2017)

Winter:
Be it hot or cold, my body is constantly shaking.
(14 April 2017)

Winter:
No matter how hard I try to stop it, i'm always shaking.
(14 April 2017)

Joshua:
Did me and my girlfriend have sex?
(14 April 2017)

Joshua:
We were both going a little crazy last night.
(14 April 2017)